Ok, finally it's time to comment and, honestly, I can't explain how this fanfiction' brightened my days and made me have a pleasant and humorous read.
I was in love with Sophia's every innocent sentence and I also laughed a lot with Max and Phoebe's reactions. Speaking of Sophia: SOPHIA YOU ARE A BRAZILIAN AMERICAN ICON, you are one of the only Brazilian characters to have a wikipedia made by an American fan and it was there on Amino that I met you.
I cried a lot with the chapters that portrayed the thunder twins confused about their feelings and even without wanting to hurt other people, I cried a lot in the chapter where she told Max that she didn't love Link. I cried with Max suffering from being forced to stay with Alyssa by Archie. Deep down he would give her enough and would definitely become a single father. In the end Archie...well, I cried a lot. Sophia was about to be taken away and Barb realized she was going to lose her forever, even though she didn't want to give up on her. I think she would do it because their lives were hell with everything. I think the girl would be happy with the McAllistens. Anyway... a lot of bad emotions, above all, a lot of laughter.
Your writing is simply wonderful, reading becomes so fruitful and enjoyable that I can't even explain it! I will definitely read more of your work, you are amazing and you have a very apparent talent with regards to writing.
I really want to thank you, I don't ship MABE, but the reading was really pleasant and made me feel good! I couldn't stop laughing for even a second. I'd like to say about some characters that I don't have words to describe: Brooklyn, Collosso, Morgan and Ray, thank you for being the best characters I've ever seen. BROOKLYN, IT'S AWESOME.
Just one more question:
1. Who is the mini-boss
2. Felix of Hidden is a mention of Miraculous.
I hope you continue with amazing works like this, all the best to you.
I was in love with Sophia's every innocent sentence and I also laughed a lot with Max and Phoebe's reactions. Speaking of Sophia: SOPHIA YOU ARE A BRAZILIAN AMERICAN ICON, you are one of the only Brazilian characters to have a wikipedia made by an American fan and it was there on Amino that I met you.
I cried a lot with the chapters that portrayed the thunder twins confused about their feelings and even without wanting to hurt other people, I cried a lot in the chapter where she told Max that she didn't love Link. I cried with Max suffering from being forced to stay with Alyssa by Archie. Deep down he would give her enough and would definitely become a single father. In the end Archie...well, I cried a lot. Sophia was about to be taken away and Barb realized she was going to lose her forever, even though she didn't want to give up on her. I think she would do it because their lives were hell with everything. I think the girl would be happy with the McAllistens. Anyway... a lot of bad emotions, above all, a lot of laughter.
Your writing is simply wonderful, reading becomes so fruitful and enjoyable that I can't even explain it! I will definitely read more of your work, you are amazing and you have a very apparent talent with regards to writing.
I really want to thank you, I don't ship MABE, but the reading was really pleasant and made me feel good! I couldn't stop laughing for even a second. I'd like to say about some characters that I don't have words to describe: Brooklyn, Collosso, Morgan and Ray, thank you for being the best characters I've ever seen. BROOKLYN, IT'S AWESOME.
Just one more question:
1. Who is the mini-boss
2. Felix of Hidden is a mention of Miraculous.
I hope you continue with amazing works like this, all the best to you.